feedback for Peita Sykes

I peer feedback for Peita Sykes. Her blog is http://peita-peita.blogspot.com/

Question 1)
Rubbisht font

Peita used real  and she took photo and used photoshop for it. That images is interesting. She arranged that thing is good. I like that images because it is amazing. I feel that images is formal design

CD cover

She chosen image about Kelly Clarkson for  font of CD cover. She  create something for it and made it better. About back of cover is interesting. She chosen some songs of Kelly Clarkson. She used photoshop for it. She arrange that song which is around image of Kelly Clarkson. Furthermore, she create background of image which is quite good. That CD  make audience like to see. That image is formal design because that image is relationship everything such as: rythm, dominance and unity.

A dot is a line for a walk

I cant find that image on this blog so i choose feedback about Illustration with conscience. That image is good.  she present quite good that images. I feel that image look like formal design

Question 2
Rubbish font: No it is formal design

CD Cover: No, it is formal design

Illustration with conscience: No, again it is still formal design.


Question 3 & 4 
I peer feedback about SWOT analysis for Rubbish font, CD Cover, Illustration with Conscience


Rubbish font
Strength :
she used reality image for her work. That image is great and It look like a cigarete

Weakness: 

she used same colour for that font. sometimes that thing make audience feel little boring

Opportunities:

image of it is great but she should make it better
Threats: 
That image is ok but she should made it better

CD Cover

Strength:

She did it quite good. She used image of some singer for her work.

Weakness:

THe font of word is not good. That thing made someone's eyes feel tired when they saw it.

Opportunities:

she made that image of CD is good. it made audience feel like to watch CD.

Threats

generally, that image is good but something is not good. She used image of Kelly Clarkson on front of CD and after back of it, she used more other female. She just used one colour for it.
Illustration with Conscience

Strength

that image is good. She used her image and her friend for that work. it is present her ideas in that image

Weakness

that thing made audience feel clearly understand about her ideas

Opportunities

there are something which she made it quite good

Threats

there is something which isnot present her ideas.